Site Search:
 
Dave's ESL Cafe's Student Discussion Forums Forum Index Dave's ESL Cafe's Student Discussion Forums
"The Internet's Meeting Place for ESL/EFL Students and Teachers from Around the World!"
 
 FAQFAQ   SearchSearch   MemberlistMemberlist   UsergroupsUsergroups   RegisterRegister 
 ProfileProfile   Log in to check your private messagesLog in to check your private messages   Log inLog in 

Please corrct my diary!

 
Post new topic   Reply to topic    Dave's ESL Cafe's Student Discussion Forums Forum Index -> Learning English
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
kaho



Joined: 19 Mar 2004
Posts: 8

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2004 4:25 pm    Post subject: Please corrct my diary! Reply with quote

This is my diary on a day. I have my personal homepage and I'm writing my dairy journal in Japanese and in English on it. Please correct my writing! If my English is right, I would like to hear better way to say it!
So, please give me good sugestions! Very Happy


We are planning to Japan Trip this summer. I will not go with them, though...It's boring to plan a trip that you are not going...Don't you think?
Today we had a meeting about it and a student who is taking Jpanese class but isn't a menber of the trip gave a presentation to us.The topic was Buddhism and Sintoism. He is quite interested in Japan and studying about Japan, not just lunguage but also Japanes culture, history, Education and so on. His speech was great! He prepared pictures and information on CD using power point. Yes, he was well prepared. Unfortunately we had Lap Top problam, so he showed the computer screen to us instead the screen. But still it was great!
I wrote today's diary in Japanese too. I can't write it in English. I mean I can write it in English, but not same as Japanese one.I want to play with English like I do with Japanese!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
asterix



Joined: 26 Jan 2003
Posts: 1654

PostPosted: Sat Apr 03, 2004 5:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

We are planning a trip to Japan this summer. I will not go with them, though...It's boring to plan a trip that you are not going on...Don't you think?
Today we had a meeting about it and a student who is taking Japanese class, but isn't a menber of the trip, gave a presentation to us. The topic was Buddhism and Shintoism. He is quite interested in Japan and studying about Japan, not just language but also Japanese culture, history, education and so on. His speech was great! He prepared pictures and information on CD using Powerpoint. Yes, he was well prepared. Unfortunately we had laptop problems, so he showed the computer screen to us instead of the (projection) screen. But still it was great!
I wrote today's diary in Japanese too. I can't write it in English. I mean I can write it in English, but not same as in Japanese. I want to play with English like I do with Japanese!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Cas



Joined: 03 Apr 2004
Posts: 7

PostPosted: Sat Apr 03, 2004 5:48 am    Post subject: Re: Please corrct my diary! Reply with quote

kaho wrote:
This is my diary on a day. I have my personal homepage and I'm writing my dairy journal in Japanese and in English on it. Please correct my writing! If my English is right, I would like to hear better way to say it!
So, please give me good sugestions! Very Happy


We are planning to Japan Trip this summer. I will not go with them, though...It's boring to plan a trip that you are not going...Don't you think?
Today we had a meeting about it and a student who is taking Jpanese class but isn't a menber of the trip gave a presentation to us.The topic was Buddhism and Sintoism. He is quite interested in Japan and studying about Japan, not just lunguage but also Japanes culture, history, Education and so on. His speech was great! He prepared pictures and information on CD using power point. Yes, he was well prepared. Unfortunately we had Lap Top problam, so he showed the computer screen to us instead the screen. But still it was great!
I wrote today's diary in Japanese too. I can't write it in English. I mean I can write it in English, but not same as Japanese one.I want to play with English like I do with Japanese!


Hi Kaho! I live in Japan, in Shizuoka ken. Don't be sad about not going on the trip. Smile Gambatte, yo!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
kaho



Joined: 19 Mar 2004
Posts: 8

PostPosted: Tue Apr 06, 2004 9:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi, Cas!
How is English spoken by Japanese? It depens on, though.
Japanese that American speak is quite good!
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic    Dave's ESL Cafe's Student Discussion Forums Forum Index -> Learning English All times are GMT - 8 Hours
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum


Dave's ESL Cafe is maintained by the one and only Dave Sperling.
Banner Advertising | Bookstore / Alta Books | FAQs | Articles | Interview with Dave
Copyright © 2018 Dave's ESL Cafe | All Rights Reserved | Contact Dave's ESL Cafe | Site Map

Teachers College, Columbia University: Train to Teach English Here or Abroad
SIT
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2002 phpBB Group