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rayt



Joined: 30 Oct 2005
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PostPosted: Tue Dec 17, 2013 4:10 pm    Post subject: Please help me with my writing Reply with quote
Dear teacher,

Please help me if my writing below is correct and proper. Or how can I re-write it more like a native speaker? Thank you very much.


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PeterAlex



Joined: 31 Dec 2013
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Location: USA
PostPosted: Sun Jan 05, 2014 4:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
hey mate you have mixed the sentenses i would recommend you to contact writing experts i found it best for you. check it out: http://www.essays.ae/

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