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A misuse of "award"

 
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hiromichi



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PostPosted: Sat Oct 17, 2015 6:58 pm    Post subject: A misuse of "award" Reply with quote

I think "damages" are to be decided by the court, so "awarding it" below should be "being awarded."

It is said that the foreign company had copied key features of the Japanese manufacturer's smart phone, awarding it approximately 100 billion in damages.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2015 12:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Both would be wrong. The sentence is ambiguous. Who is being awarded?

A better sentence would be:

It is said that the foreign company had copied key features of the Japanese manufacturer's smart phone, resulting in an award of approximately 100 billion in damages to the Japanese manufacturer.


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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2015 3:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lotus:
Thank you very much.
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