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[muni]

please correct the follopwing sentences

I tried calling you many time but first your phone was busy and atlast when I got through the person on the phone was not able to haer me I think there was something wrong with your phone, I said hello many times but the person at the other end was not hearing it,

[The Unknown Su]

I tried calling you many times but your phone was busy. When I finally got through, the person on the other line was unable to hear me. I think there might be something wrong with your phone.

(The rest you can omit because you are just repeating yourself.)

[muni]

thanks
that ws very nice of you!!!