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[Hawkowl]

Hello everyone!

Recently, I made my personal blog site. So I made a sentence below.
My question is that Is this sentence natural written state? or have problems?
Let me know.

One more thing, I wrote "let me know" above in this situation.
Can I say "let me awaken" here? or have better sentence??
Other things that I can think of are...
"let me realize"
"let me enlightened"
"let me see"
so on

Plz help me

Thank you for everything in advance.


This is the sentence I made for my website.
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Hello! I sincerely welcome everyone who happend to visit here.
Well, As you sure will be noticed,
My English skill isn't good enough for all of you guys out there
But I guess, something trying is the first step that I should take.
So, pardon me If I have any mistake in my writing.
Furthermore, If any of you think there is wrong in my sentences,
It would be really nice of you correcting my English.
So feel free that you can help.
This web site is dedicated to travel and thought.
So if any of you guys have any ideas,
Let me share your precious ideas, thus we can share our thought and
wonderful lives.

Thank you very much for all of you!!!
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[RebeccaGMW]

How is this?

Hello! I sincerely welcome everyone who happens to visit here.
Well, as you may have noticed, my English skill isn't good enough for all of you guys out there
But I guess, trying something is the first step that I should take.
So, pardon me if I have any mistakes in my writing.
Furthermore, if any of you think there is anything wrong in my sentences,
it would be really nice if you would correct my English.
So feel free to help.
This web site is dedicated to travel and thought.
So if any of you guys have any ideas, let me know your precious ideas. Thus we can share our thoughts and our wonderful lives.
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[LucentShade]

As an addition, "Let me know" is the best way to write that, if you want to express "Please tell me if I made any mistakes or errors." "Let me see" would be used if you want to say "Let me see the note that you are writing"--when you actually want to see something, physically. (However, people often say "let me see [your pencil]" (or a different noun inside []) when they really mean "let me hold or use [ ]")
The point here is that "let me know" is the best choice to say what you wanted to say in that post. It's also very natural and conversational As for "Let me realize" and "let me enlightened". . .those don't work, I don't think anyone would say either of those.