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[susan_wu]

Hi,

Here are two articles. Could you help me to rewrite them? Many thanks for your help.

Article 1:
SEFC is a good textbook for middle school students. The texts have some interesting colourful pictures on in. The passage is closed tense and everyday life. It can make student interested in it. It can improve our reading and writing, especially listening and speaking. However I hope that there�ll add some discussing about interesting things and American cultures. I like English song very much. So I hope that you can make some popular English song in it.
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Article 2:
In the Mid-autumn Day, our family can sit together and eat the moon cakes. The moon in the Mid-autumn Day is great around and bright. We can enjoy the moon. My sister and brother and I play are talked together. Because we are busy in daily. So we don�t get in touch with them. In this time we can talk a long time. We can talk some interesting things. At this time, I feel the life is wonderful and happiness. So this is the reason why I like the Mid-autumn best.