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river1974



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PostPosted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 6:04 pm    Post subject: also Reply with quote

Dear teachers:

The above defects *also* do not comply with Article 18(3) of the Patent Law Enforcement Rules.

It sounds a little weird to me. Is it better to rewrite as: The above defects do not comply with Article 18(3) of the Patent Law Enforcement Rules either.

Thanks.
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bud



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PostPosted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 7:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Your version is another natural way to express the idea, but I see nothing weird about the first way.
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Bob S.



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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, the original form sounds like polite Business English. The rewrite sounds like common speech.
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river1974



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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 5:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks. Maybe I think too much... Smile
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