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river1974
Joined: 20 May 2003 Posts: 525 Location: Taiwan
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 6:04 pm Post subject: also |
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Dear teachers:
The above defects *also* do not comply with Article 18(3) of the Patent Law Enforcement Rules.
It sounds a little weird to me. Is it better to rewrite as: The above defects do not comply with Article 18(3) of the Patent Law Enforcement Rules either.
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bud
Joined: 09 Mar 2003 Posts: 2111 Location: New Jersey, US
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2005 7:02 pm Post subject: |
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Your version is another natural way to express the idea, but I see nothing weird about the first way. |
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Bob S.

Joined: 29 Apr 2004 Posts: 1767 Location: So. Cal
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:49 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, the original form sounds like polite Business English. The rewrite sounds like common speech. |
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river1974
Joined: 20 May 2003 Posts: 525 Location: Taiwan
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 5:28 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks. Maybe I think too much...  |
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