Special Experience to Climb He-Huan mountain in Tawain

[Nancy123456]

Could you imagine that maybe, you could step on the whole world under your feet. You know what? This was my main feeling when I got the top of He-Huan mountain in Taiwan. In the very begging, we wouldn't plan for mountain climbing if our original idea could be carried out.

Our car ran along the way of the mountain. We also enjoyed the whole scenery out of the window. That was time for early spring in Taiwan, the weather was very warm. Sun and air was also comfortable for people. Many kinds of flowers bloomed and covered the whole mountain. It was a wonderful season for us. We still drove to the top, and when the car got a higher location, we could feel clearly the decreasing temperature. Even, we also smelt the cold, white snow, still not melted away. The higher location we got; the smaller scenes: persons, houses, trees, streets and so on, we saw. It was like that we got the highest top of the whole world, when we arrived at the very top of the mountain. We saw clearly this world. Wow! What a wonderful life, I live on the amazing earth.

Jack in the movie--"Titanic" said, "I'm the king of the world". I guessed that I never knew his truly feeling until I stood here.

[Kevin123456_7]

you know what?
if you can decribes the details about your little trip, your writting will be nicer.
and i also konw this mountain.
i always want to see it.

[bianer61]

i like your 〝Quotation〞about Jack's words in Titanic.
it makes me also want to experience the magic of this mountain.
maybe, one day, i will go to Taiwan to climb the mountain you described.

[kacau0216]

Could you imagine that maybe, you could step on the whole world under your feet.

Good beginning.
you use a good question to describe a great painting for me.
and it also makes me understand what a high mountain you will talk about.

[Sibun0127]

In the very begging, we wouldn't plan for mountain climbing if our original idea could be carried out.

Hi, Baby...
I found out a very, very, very...small mistake in the first paragraph of your writing.
Maybe, you wnat to write "beginning", am i right?
and i think you may write carefully next time.
this is my little suggestion.