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mukesh
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find out the grammer error

Post by mukesh » Wed Dec 24, 2003 8:45 pm

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At the time of coloums voyages, native americans used an astrounding diversity of languages, greater by far than the diversity used by europeans

2. copper was the first metal used by human and is second only to Iron into its utility through the ages.

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Post by sita » Mon Dec 29, 2003 5:55 pm

Hi!

Grammar


At the time of Columbus' voyages, native Americans used an astounding diversity of languages, greater by far than the diversity used by Europeans 2. Copper was the first metal used by human and is second only to Iron into its utility through the ages.

What do you mean?
:shock:
Siân

revel
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Said another way....

Post by revel » Wed Jan 21, 2004 8:07 am

Good morning!

These sentences said another way might be:

1. At the time of Columbus' voyages, Native Americans employed an astounding diversity of languages. This diversity was greater by far than that used by the Europeans.

2. Copper was the first metal used by humans and its usefullness has been second only to iron through the ages.

peace,
revel.

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