How to correct this sentence?
Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2005 2:26 pm
In my grammar book, there is one question I am sure of.
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Question : Correct the following sentence
"A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain, distributes throughout the year"
Answer in the grammar book : Change "distributes"-->to "distributing"
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I thought there might be three ways I can correct the sentence right.
I need your opinion on my answers.
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1) A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain, and the rain is distributed throughout the year
-> A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain (which is) distributed throughout the year.
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2) A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain, and a rain forest distributes (over 100 meters of rain) throughout the year
--> A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain, which distributes throughout the year.
---> A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain, distributing throughout the year.
3) A rain forest, which receives over 100 meters of rain, distributes (over 100 meters of rain) throughout the year.
-> A rain forest, receiving over 100 meters of rain, distributes throughout the year.
Thanks
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Question : Correct the following sentence
"A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain, distributes throughout the year"
Answer in the grammar book : Change "distributes"-->to "distributing"
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I thought there might be three ways I can correct the sentence right.
I need your opinion on my answers.
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1) A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain, and the rain is distributed throughout the year
-> A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain (which is) distributed throughout the year.
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2) A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain, and a rain forest distributes (over 100 meters of rain) throughout the year
--> A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain, which distributes throughout the year.
---> A rain forest receives over 100 meters of rain, distributing throughout the year.
3) A rain forest, which receives over 100 meters of rain, distributes (over 100 meters of rain) throughout the year.
-> A rain forest, receiving over 100 meters of rain, distributes throughout the year.
Thanks