Comma use

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Sheila Collins
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Comma use

Post by Sheila Collins » Mon May 31, 2010 4:01 pm

We're stuck on this sentence:

“The sink overflowed and flooded the kitchen, as I did not check it before I left the house.”

Would American comma usage separate the clauses or not?

Heath
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To express myself better...

Post by Heath » Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:14 am

This is one of those sentences that makes me want to completely ignore 'the rules' because sometimes we just want to express ourselves as clearly as we possibly can.

Without the comma the sentence seems more vague. Yes, logic and context make it clear, but it still feels vaguer. I like to be able to chunk the text how I feel best conveys my intended meaning.

Can you see the differences in the following sentences?
  • He broke the chair and cut himself because he wasn't careful.
    He broke the chair, and cut himself because he wasn't careful.
    He broke the chair and cut himself, because he wasn't careful.

woodcutter
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Post by woodcutter » Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:46 am

The US "rules" appear to run like this. Best ignored.

http://crosswaterfarm.com/commas/2ic.html

"As" is not a FANBOY. Comma between ind.clauses = Shock, horror, etc.

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