Help me to write a TOEFl essay

[Dina]

Hello
Please may I find some help here ??
I am preparing myself for the international toefl test and I need to practice how to write a toefl essay as I need to get a high score .
Please can I find any one here who can help me in that ?
I will sumbit him /her my essay online via email to correct and tell me any weak points in it ?
can anybody help me in that ?
any ESL tecaher ??/
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[Bo]

Lol. Ok, send it to me here, in a private message.

B.