I need some corrections.... Please

[Poor Student]

Dear teachers,
I need some help. My English Grammar is not good enough. Please show me mistakes. Thanks

My Autobiography
My name is Andriy. Let me tell you a little about myself – I was born in Russia, Gelendzik in 197* my birthday in March *1. I was born in a small town of Gelengzik and I was group up in Ukraine. You can find on the map a place where I was born. It is South of Russia. I learned a lot from my childhood. Of course I can’t consciously remember anything from the first five or six yours of my life after birth. I finished High School # 50 in Jun 1997. I learned a lot about Math, Chemistry, History, Biology, Information Science, and other subjects. At the age of 17 I found a first job in my life. Someone wants to be a doctor or cosmonaut, but I wanted to be a truck driver. I didn’t work as a truck driver, but I was working for DENARS CO. in Ukraine since 1996 to 1999. I was responsible for distribution of products and supply with contract purchasing. My relatives recommended me as a good worker.
Second job which I found was cook-supplier I cooked meals for construction workers, purchased supplies and products for kitchen. I had been working there from1999 to 2002.
I came to the United State in September 5th, in 2003. My first job in the U.S. was in West Linn. I worked as a housekeeper at the Rose Linn Care Center. I had cleaning rooms, vacuumed floor, trained new employees on how to perform duties. When I wanted to say something, I could not because I didn’t know the word for it. I didn’t have enough money at my first job in the United State. I promised myself when I become an educated, I will buy everything what I want. When I wanted something better for myself and the future of my family, decided to study an English at Mount Hood Community College.
Now, I am living in the richest country in the world. I am a full time student at MHCC, and I am a full time worker at the company Statewide Distributing. As you can see my life is very interesting for me. I see if people are rich, it is not because they are lucky. The reasons are that they are working hard, and they are trying to do their best. I have had ups in my life, and I have had down, but I never give up.
Sincerely, Andriy

[Poor Student]

Thanks a lot!...

[Lorikeet]

Perhaps instead of getting angry, you should post on the Student Forums. There are two places where students can get help with English questions.