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Ben H Nevis Jnr.
Joined: 12 Jun 2004 Posts: 108 Location: peninsular china
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 4:46 am Post subject: The self-marking writing exam |
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Two problems here. Testing and grading. I'll try to weave the points through each other and see what results.....
I'm currently taking a third year university students for a "writing skills" class and I'm wondering how best to approach their examinations. I've been using an American book called Mosaic 3, whch concentrates more on paragraph unity, essay organisation, editing, planning etc, rather than the grammar/vocab.
I could just give them a list of topics, ask them to write an essay or two, spend the next week scratching my head trying to decipher the Chinglish and allocate a somewhat arbitary grade (based on writing ability, not grammar or vocab). However, last Friday I gave them a dry run of a multiple choice writing exam, in which they had to piece together fixed chunks of language, selectively edit "bad paragraphs", choose suitable topic sentences etc. Though it required more preparation, it was relatively easy to mark (3 hours for 30 papers), can be given back to them to self-correct under open book conditions, and will be easy to give feedback on.
The students begged to differ though. They told me it was the hardest exam they had ever sat (which gave me a faint glow of pride, I must confess) and that their idea of multiple choice was to have one and only one correct answer. Some of them did completely misunderstand the odd question, despite having it explained, but enough of the students got enough of the questions right to reassure me that I am doing the right thing. However, if doing the "right thing" means losing all the rapport I've built up over the last two months, is it worth it ?
I know the students are all used to scoring in the 90%'s, but this doesn't really seem helpful in diagnosing problems and giving a realistic assessment of their ability. I'd like to wean them onto harder exams similar to those in my own degree, where the passmark is nearer 50 % and a plus 80 % mark indicates excellence rather than competence (and which I can scale as necessary to suit the institutional needs). In this dry run, they scored roughly as follows....
80 and above : 2
70-79 : 10
60-69 : 9
50-59 : 7
40-50 : 2
...which suggests that my exam was pitched about right.
Just try telling that to the spanner wielding mutineers below deck....
Does anyone have any experience in trying recondition students into accepting lower overall scores ?
Does anyone have any experience in trying to design writing tests of this type ?
Failing this, can anyone recommend a useful webiste that does ?
Cheers, BHNJnr |
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tarzaninchina
Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 348 Location: World
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:19 am Post subject: My Style |
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I'm teaching a third-year English Writing course.
I've been basically doing my own thing and given all the experiences I've drawn on, I'm glowing in my own brilliance.
I've geared the course in two parts, one for each term. The first part I've gone over the writing process, descriptions (of all kinds), and vocab. Then there's lots of marking.
The second term will be mostly formatted assignments (e.g. letters).
My exams are coming up too and I'm the one who needs to both prepare and mark the exams. I've taken two approaches to this. First, after each lesson, develop a potential question (which can be edited closer to exam time). Second, use the coursework as practice for the exam.
I know what I'm doing because I've implemented my own stellar course (which I'll most likely post next summer).
As for grades, well, different styles of writing require different marking structures. Take, for example, a profile. Very standard responses, so the marking scheme is wildly different from others. Everything else, students will get the gist of your marking scheme because they'll know what "the grade you give them" means and they're good at figuring it out too.
I don't know what you've taught and I don't know how little marking you'll want to do, but there are ways. You're a teacher now, so don't look online for a cut-and-paste test like a bad student who buys an essay online. BTW, unless it's grammar or literature, multiple choice essays are not all that great for writing courses.
Test according to the goals of the course plus anything you're taught in addition to that. Just remember to keep a lesson diary or something similar in case students come up alongside the dean and accuse you of not teaching something on the exam. Big problem, easily minimized. |
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badtyndale

Joined: 23 Jun 2004 Posts: 181 Location: In the tool shed
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:21 am Post subject: |
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I don't think it's entirely possible (or even desirable) to divorce grammar and vocabulary from any of the main English language learning areas. However, it is possible to award grades based upon the various aspects of a written text that would be considered as a whole at a UK university, for example. These aspects may include: organisation and structure; general presentation and appropriateness of style; task achievement and criticism. Taken together with grammar and vocabulary you could devise a marking scheme (perhaps similar to IELTS) in each area and then average out a final mark.
For UK undergraduates the pass mark is 40% and this is a difficult concept to try to get across. I don't pretend to know how to reconcile this one other than to suggest some further mathematical manipulation that brings the results in line with the general scheme of things in the host institution. Nevertheless, I feel it only prudent to point out that such differences do exist, especially if the students may be planning overseas study.
If you're having to decipher Chinglish that doesn't bode well. I wouldn't expect UK professors to even try. |
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latefordinner
Joined: 19 Aug 2003 Posts: 973
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 8:29 am Post subject: |
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Thanks, BHN jr, for starting an interesting thread!
When I first read,
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However, if doing the "right thing" means losing all the rapport I've built up over the last two months, is it worth it ? |
, I had to wonder if aliens had taken over your body. You never struck me as the teacher who curries favour with the class at the expense of the curriculum. Ahh, but reading on,
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I know the students are all used to scoring in the 90%'s, but this doesn't really seem helpful in diagnosing problems and giving a realistic assessment of their ability. |
This is the crux of the problem, and you're dealing with it. They're too used to being catered to. This is why their grammar is so terrible when they get to uni. They're products of the famous Chinese middle school of language learning. So their grammar must be better than a native speaker's, right? You're dead on, they need to have their expectations adjusted, and your preliminary bell curve indicates that you're on the right track.
I'm trying to do the same thing, but at junior middle school. I had so many classes cancelled or postponed at the last minute, I decided to skip teaching the review lesson and give my second year classes a mid-term test. No multiple choice questions, no T/F, only questions and answers. The hardest thing for many of them to do was to read and understand the instruction written in bold face at the top of each section: Please answer in complete sentences. The results have swamped me; I have 8 classes with an average of almost 50 students per class. However the feedback has told me a lot (a lot of bad news, sigh) about weaknesses that need to be addressed. Isn't that what a mid-term should do?
One thing I did (as an experiment) that may be useful: I began with an expected perfect score and took off marks for each error. I haven't seen a perfect 50 out of 50 yet, but I've seen a few 48s and a 49. I took off a half mark for a small grammatical error, a whole mark for an incomplete sentence, a whole mark for a wrong answer or the answer to the wrong question, up to 2 marks for an earth-shatteringly stupid answer, and 2 marks for not even trying. There were 22 questions, so if all the student did was sign his name, he got 6 out of 50. One student did. Cheating brought the mark to zero for several students <sigh>. It wasn't my original intent, but I'm not unhappy with the result that a student who is mentally handicapped did better than the kids who think they're better than the teacher.
Now of course the hard part, even harder than the marking; getting the Chinese staff to take my results seriously and incorporate them into their official marking schemes. Well, even if they do nothing, I think I've gained something from the exercise.
Tarzaninchina, that was a lot of sound observation and advice! |
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tarzaninchina
Joined: 16 Aug 2004 Posts: 348 Location: World
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 8:51 am Post subject: Academic Bribes |
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Last year, at the college I'm at now, the previous foreign teachers had to fail about 50% of their students! The admin lowered that to about 20%. Then they asked the teachers to do a make-up. The teachers did, but two days before the make-up, the admin taught them (select students who had bribed them) the answers!
Likewise in my previous private school I taught at where teachers would submit the grades, but not sign the marking sheets. The school would alter the grades as they saw fit, which meant higher grades to boost the school's rep, unless they really wanted a kid gone.
There's a heavy load of problems about getting the admin to recognize the grades you give, but I will try my darndest to do that successfully this year.
Have any of you received a bribe or gift a little too close to a test or exam? |
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Old Dog

Joined: 22 Oct 2004 Posts: 564 Location: China
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 11:15 am Post subject: Assessment |
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It really is good to read your accounts of the thought and trouble so many of you go to to teach really well and to effect some improvement in the English levels of your students. And maybe the better thing is that you seem to be doing these things because you believe they are important, not because they might score you brownie points with greater powers than you, be they the students, the Chinese teachers or the Admin.
There is not a jaded bone in my body despite the years here but I do take certain Chinese realities into account in my work. Maybe you can change them in ways I have never tried to - or, maybe, the Chinese teachers will perform some sort of charade of accommodating your suggestions. God only knows.
I teach here only in Middle Schools because that's where my experience has been and that's, I guess, where my forte lies. So I can't comment at all on what is happening in Universities - except that I do know that my thousands of former students all expect to pass in everything throughout their university careers and to pass with great effort if at a good university and to pass with no effort at a low-grade university.
As for middle schools, I've gone to enormous lengths to provide complete sets of results for each student in the classes I teach - that's 1290 with this year's enrolment. But no one really wants them. They used to make a small show of asking and I'd give them a simple result. Then, in this school, I spread my wings and gave an overall result based on rather more systematic assessment throughout the term. But, having done that, no one wanted the results when I had finished. I sat on them, waiting for someone to ask for them but the call never came.
Nevertheless, I continue to make a brave show of assessment knowing that whatever assessment I do is for my own information and not for any final report to parents. But the brave show has an effect universally. If there's a mark attached to whatever is being done, then greater effort is put in. I assess now for my own information and for "psychological effect". I have a yellow-covered folder which I place on my desk with a modest flourish at the beginning of each lesson!
My first experience of Chinese assessment was my most enlightening. I attended the Patriotic Singing Contest - where else but in Hubei! Each class - this was a Teachers' College - was obliged to present a patriotic song. Some of the efforts were appalling - deliberate, I might add, since this was the student "pay back" to the College for the compulsion - but, appalling though the efforts were, I saw the judges entering scores of 9.23, 9.41, 9.67. Then I realized that for face, every score was preceded by 9. How much better 9.23 sounds than 23/100!
So if you want a pass mark of 50%, then maybe you can express this as 9.5 - and everyone will know what it means, everyone will have face (however undeserved).
To digress - As for the "pay back", you can see this in almost every Chinese meeting you attend. They are generally compulsory. But there's a payback. No one listens. Everyone talks - and the speaker drones on ( or emotes widly when in pariotic mode) regardless. A friend once explained it this way, "They can make us attend to show their power. But they can't make us listen so we talk to show ours." |
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Roger
Joined: 19 Jan 2003 Posts: 9138
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 11:50 am Post subject: |
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Exams and tests in China are token exercises to bring students in line with their teachers' intentions, but it actually works the other way around. Students loathe and fear them but they have the upper hand in the matter.
My first school gave us no guidelines on how to test our students, so I asked a senior teacher.
He answered that what mattered the most was how the CLASS as one body fared rather than how individual students did during those exams and tests. To me, this was a revealing answer.
When being prodded, he went on to say any grading method was acceptable; if students failed they would geond chance PRIOR to the end of the term - at the teacher's expense (in terms of time!).
So there you are: the teacher is regarded as the person responsible for the success and failure of their students!
But as foreign teachers, we have even less clout over them. In our university, foreign teachers enter the grades of their students on a sheet with pencil; no doubt the upper echelons here use pen when they alter our entries...
Personally, I think we should be left alone in this matter, and Chinese teachers should in fact have to defer to our opinion on the English levels of our students. The relationship between CHinese teachers and their students is bordering on incestuousness, with all the potential of under-the-table deals imaginable. Has someone else heard of Chinese female students posting job applications with nude pictures in the envelope? I am not surprised at all about this!
Lastly, I am surprised that the OP feels he shouldn'downgrade papers for poor grammar; of course, grammar is a key element on exam papers!
One day, I hope, China is adopting a more advanced examination formula. How about the British one whereby no teacher gives exams to his or her own students? |
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Madmaxola
Joined: 04 Jul 2004 Posts: 238
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 4:34 pm Post subject: |
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Man,
You have to judge your students level, and your ability to bring it up, if you want to grade really hard.
If they are really far back, then it will take time for them to get better.
For them to trust you they gotta know you're gonna give it to them easy for a bit... then start making it harder to show them exactly what you want.
Don't just expect the students to jump to the level you want them to be, you have to work the grading system as a stepping course. Give it to em bad at first, but for low points, to show them what it's gonna be like later. Then start grading at that next level.
Use it as a ladder
There's my two cents on teaching method
Matthew |
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Roger
Joined: 19 Jan 2003 Posts: 9138
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 3:52 am Post subject: |
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Madmaxola wrote: |
Man,
You have to judge your students level, and your ability to bring it up, if you want to grade really hard.
If they are really far back, then it will take time for them to get better.
For them to trust you they gotta know you're gonna give it to them easy for a bit... then start making it harder to show them exactly what you want.
Don't just expect the students to jump to the level you want them to be, you have to work the grading system as a stepping course. Give it to em bad at first, but for low points, to show them what it's gonna be like later. Then start grading at that next level.
My reply:
"You must judge by their personal level..."
No! Their own teachers must bring them up to the level on which I operate. Why hire a native speaker for students who are disfunctional?
The whole series of exams in China is a sham!
Use it as a ladder
There's my two cents on teaching method
Matthew |
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7969

Joined: 26 Mar 2003 Posts: 5782 Location: Coastal Guangdong
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 4:08 am Post subject: hmmmm |
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here's what i think:
i always have grand ideas of things to do in my classes. and then i quickly abandon most if not all of them. i'm only paid to do the speaking and listening parts of the textbook, and give the occasional handout to students on western customs and traditions. to do more, is only going to:
a: add to the already overburdened students workload; and/or
b. lose them
giving tests? homework? i see over 650 students a week, 13 classes of over 50 students for 40 minutes a week each. i don't see them often enough to even remember the names of most of these kids. the only homework i will consider giving out is group work. i'm not going to spend enormous amounts of time reading 650 compositions or test papers on a weekly or bi-weekly basis. why? i'm not asked to do it. if the school thought it was important they would have said as much to me.
i just try to keep it simple in my classes. that's what they want, that's what i give them. |
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Ben H Nevis Jnr.
Joined: 12 Jun 2004 Posts: 108 Location: peninsular china
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Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 1:50 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks folks. Even if, with the end of term creeping nearer and nearer, it proves too late to implement much of it for this particular class, your good advice has been filed away for future use.
I'll provide a little context to my particular class. I take around 30 (of which up to half may be asleep at any one time) for 5 x 40 min teaching periods a week. This would be just fine, but for the 120 postgraduate students who occasionally have writing work too. Still, compared to some, maybe I am in no position to be complaining about too much marking.
Bookwise, I'm not sure it is really what the students need. However, after the students had been told to buy Book 2 by the English department, only to find that they'd told me to plan lessons from Book 3, I was loath to tear it up and go it alone after they'd had to shell out money twice. Besides, I was in a new culture and starting a new profession, whose purpose, in the case of this class, had not been made clear to me. Maybe I would find this purpose around Chapter 6 if I ploughed on in and tried to keep my head above water for the time being. Sure enough, I now know what's required and sure enough, with the benefit of hindsight, I would have told the students on day one to converge the bookstore with flaming torches and see to it that no student would ever have the misfortune to buy Book 3 again. Ok, so maybe that's being a little harsh, but what use is paragraph structure/order/style when they can't even write a sentence ?
The standard of writing was farly high when they adapted from a letter, but as soon as I asked them to write a paragraph without help on the fairly broad topic of "water", it became evident that this class was going to be harder than I'd thought. Sure, they can understand me and make themselves understood fairly well in English, but when they write, it's all stream of conciousness. Of course, everyone does this to some extent, but most of us g/ back, aanalyse edit and. But self doubt is not part of the mindset here. Perhaps stream of unconciousness is more apt a term. They seem to believe in quantity over quality, being the first to finish and so are quite happy to rephrase the same point over and over (and over ?) again rather than risk leaving empty space on the page. I've been trying to limit them to 7 or 8 sentences.
This means they have to leave out ideas, they have to leave out irrelevant ideas. And they have to think more about their choice of words and this means they also have to think about new concepts and so on like deciding for themselves when to breathe.
When they think about their choice of words. In a word, concepts such as combining clauses are new and they have to think about their choice of words when combining clauses. And when choosing words for combining clauses they have to sometimes leave out ideas.
Now imagine if that was crammed full of grammatical mistakes too and devoid of punctuation.....
Tarzan in China wrote:
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You're a teacher now, so don't look online for a cut-and-paste test like a bad student who buys an essay online. BTW, unless it's grammar or literature, multiple choice essays are not all that great for writing courses. |
badtyndale wrote:
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I don't think it's entirely possible (or even desirable) to divorce grammar and vocabulary from any of the main English language learning areas. |
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If you're having to decipher Chinglish that doesn't bode well. I wouldn't expect UK professors to even try. |
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Lastly, I am surprised that the OP feels he shouldn'downgrade papers for poor grammar; of course, grammar is a key element on exam papers! |
How can I tell where the mistake is being made ? Be it red, green or blue, there just isn't enough ink in China to correct all their mstakes. Isn't it better to target my feedback? This is why I am trying to develop guided multi-choice style exams, to test them on how to fit the bigger picture together. They are in 3rd year at uni. Their Chinese teachers are supposed to have taught them how to write a sentence and use verbs correctly.
As well as the exam, I'l also ask them to hand in two written essays which they can work on in their own time. That way, maybe more of the grammar/vocab can be ironed out before it reaches me. After one of the students was caught brazenly sifting through her textbook in the test, I have low expectations of their ability to resist cheating like *beep*, but I feel it's worth a go.
I dunno.... |
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