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Lorean



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PostPosted: Sat Oct 27, 2007 2:24 pm    Post subject: Writing Class Problem Reply with quote

Preamble: I have to teach a college level writing class two hours a week. I have been given no course-material to speak of. The classroom has nothing but a blackboard.

Problem: I have a technical background. I have no idea how to teach writing to college students.
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Nemesis



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 12:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Google "ESL writing materials."

Here's a link to get you started: http://www.eslgold.com/writing/lesson_plans.html
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tw



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 12:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

From personal experience and in all honesty, teaching English writing to Chinese college students is a waste of time. No matter what you teach and what you tell them, they will still stick to their own style and copy from each other. Of course, you can thank their Chinese teachers for telling them that to write werll in English, they have to memorize all these fancy and pretty English prhases and expressions.

Start counting how often you see "with the development of (China's/today's) (modern) society/technology)..." in papers. Also, do a search on teaching writing and read the various threads.


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Songbird



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 12:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, this will be very short as I have a huge MA assignment due....

I teach writing. How long will you do it for? One or 2 semesters (whole year)?

First semester- I am teaching small things, a few weeks on notes, letters, invitations, envelopes (very different in Chinese) and resumes. At the end of this 'period' I held an exam for letters, both personal & business.

For this week I am doing something different- I was given a simple role-plaing game, so they will play it in pairs, write about their experience and then create their own game- I real challenge!

Next 2 weeks- will do the planning process. They are utterly clueless about planning and not throwing themselves straight into it. Even when they do begin longer pieces you will still need to reel 'em in.

The next couple of lessons we will begin differing paragraph structures. Search the net for these in wriiting websites (esp. OWL don't have time to look for site now). There will be an exam on this at the end.

But the last 2 weeks I will be having writing conferences, mainly because I will be continuing teaching them next semester. I will do this over 2 weeks, I barely get through 17 students in the 2 hour period!

Next year- about 6 weeks- will revise planning, continue the various paragraph structures. In the last half will battle it out with bigger pieces, e.g. essays. Won't be too big, less than 200 words (they are barely at CET4 level and they only write 120 words). There's no point teaching them to write pages and pages if they can't refine the quality of what they have first. Take 1 bite at a time.
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eslstudies



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 1:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

A basic question: What is the students' major? Teaching real life text types that they are likely to encounter in the workforce makes sense [eg, business English]. Some of the textbooks available in Foreign Language bookstores aren't too bad, and may help you.
Also, you need a very strong command of grammar to teach writing effectively.
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mjlpsu



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 1:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The best supplementary materials for writing are at http://owl.english.purdue.edu
I use a bit of it for my writing classes because it goes really well with the book the school gave us.
You need to teach them about process, citation, plagiarism, research, and grammar. Those seem to be the most important aspects of writing that students are lacking.
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seperley



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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 2:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

My results from teaching writing have been good, but it required many hours of arduous correction. Why? Although they had Chinese teachers who taught writing, their papers went uncorrected, and the students expected me to overlook serious flaws as well. As soon as they caught onto the fact that I was actually reading their papers, they made corrections and continued to make corrections until I found their work acceptable. From that point on, my students' work progressed nicely.

I found it interesting that my students were willing to write about personal experiences such as their fears, their happiest moments, their most memorable friends or relatives. While these topics may seem juvenile to E1 students, my Chinese students reveled in relating personal experiences. It seemed that they had a very good sense of beginning, middle and end.

One exercise which I found useful was to give the students a five-paragraph essay which I had composed for them. They were instructed to study it and to employ expressions as well as transitional words and phrases which they found in the essay. I began with an informal essay and then gave them a formal essay. I pointed out the differences between the two.

Initially, these students displayed very little aptitude for writing in the English language. Given time and direction, however, they actually produced 300-500 word in-class essays for their final exams which required little or no correction.

I admit that this may be a fluke or the result of greater per-student attention than usual. I taught only one group of forty students for two hours per week, so I was able to spend more time with their papers than any other foreign teacher (or Chinese teacher for that matter) could.
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 5:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Writing - Lesson 1 - Introduction to English Writing

There are many components of English writing, which means that there are many different parts. The components of English writing include; vocabulary 词汇, syntax 句法, grammar 语法, sentence and paragraph order 根据其重要性排列的, punctuation 标点, capitalization 大写字母, style 文体, formatting (paragraphs 段, margins 边际 / 字), and more.

Within the many components of English writing, the most important thing is be able to write good sentences.

Whether your vocabulary is small (you don't know many English words) or whether your vocabulary is big (you know many English words) does not matter. Learning how to use the words that you do know to write good sentences is the most important thing.

Categories 种类 of Sentences

There are two primary 主要 categories 种类 of sentences: declarative and interrogative. Declarative sentences are statements, which basically means they are sentences which give information. Interrogative sentences ask questions.

There are different styles of declarative sentences, such as regular style - "I am a man", exclamatory style where the sentences give both information and feeling - "I hate you!" and imperative style where the sentences give information as a command 命令- "You must do it!".

For now, at your current level of English, you only need to think about declarative and interrogative sentences - making statements and asking question.

Types 种类 of Sentences

As well as the two primary 主要 categories 种类 of sentences, there are 4 types 种类 of sentences;

> simple sentences

> compound sentences

> complex sentences

> compound-complex sentences

I am often surprised too see that many of my students CANNOT write good simple sentences, and yet they try to write compound-complex sentences. If you cannot write good simple sentences, you will never be able to write compound-complex sentences.

Think of this analogy 类推 :-

Being able to write a good simple sentence is like being able to cook a delicious meal for yourself.

Being able to write good compound sentences and good complex sentences is like being able to cook a delicious meal for 2 people; you and your best friend.

Being able to write a good compound-compound sentence is like being able to cook a delicious meal for your family - 3 or 4 people.

If you can't cook a delicious meal for yourself, then you certainly cannot cook a delicious meal for 2, 3 or 4 people!

So, what are simple, compound, complex and compound-complex sentences?

A simple sentence has one independent clause, which means that it has one subject and one verb. Two simple examples - "John is a man." and "I can sing."

Simple sentences can, and usually do, also contain adjectives 形容词 - words that describe nouns, and adverbs 副词 - words that describe verbs and adjectives, but the basic idea of one subject and one verb remains the same.

Examples: "John is a tall man." and "I can sing well."

A slightly confusing factor about simple sentences is that both the subject and the verb can be compound. This means that they can be double.

Examples;

"John and Paul are men." The subject is "John" AND "Paul"; it is a double subject - a compound subject.

"I can sing and dance." The verb is "sing" AND "dance"; it is a double verb - a compound verb.

Learning how to write good simple sentences is very, very important. If you can write good simple sentences but you do not know how to write compound sentences, complex sentences or compound-complex sentences, you can still write essays, reports or even books!

Do you know the very famous and successful American author, Ernest Hemmingway 海明威? Do you know that he wrote many of his books using simple sentences? Ernest Hemmingway's 海明威 books have been bought and read by many millions of people! He became very rich by writing - writing simple sentences. Here is an extract from one of Ernest Hemmingway's books:-

The driver started up the street. I settled back. Brett moved close to me. We sat close against each other. I put my arm around her. She rested against me comfortably. It was very hot and bright. The houses looked sharply white. We turned out onto the boulevard. Ahead was a policeman directing traffic. He raised his baton. The car slowed suddenly.

All simple sentences from a very successful writer!

A compound sentence has 2 (or more) independent clauses. An independent clause is a group of words that has a meaning on its own. The 2 independent clauses of a compound sentence are joined together to make one sentence with coordination conjunctions - for, and, nor, but, or, yet and so.

Here are some examples:-

People are mammals 哺乳动物 and dogs are mammals. "People are mammals" is an independent clause; it can be a sentence on its own. "Dogs are mammals" is also an independent clause; it can


also be a sentence on its own. The 2 clauses (sentences) joined together by the word "and" make a compound sentence.

It rained today so I didn't go swimming. "It rained today" is an independent clause; it can be a sentence on its own. "I didn't go swimming" is also an independent clause; it can also be a sentence on its own. The 2 clauses (sentences) joined together by the word "so" make a compound sentence.

A semi-colon 分号 ; can also be used to join two independent clauses and make a compound sentence, but that's a lesson for when your English has improved!

A complex sentence contains one independent clause and one (sometimes 2 or 3) dependent clause. The independent clause is sometimes also called the �main clause.�
A dependent clause is a group of words that cannot be a sentence on its own because it has no meaning on its own, but it does have a meaning when joined to an independent clause.

Complex sentences use subordinating conjunctions to join the clauses. Subordinating conjunctions include: until, while, and even though.

Here are some examples:-

I couldn't speak English until I was 15. "I couldn't speak English" is an independent clause; it can be a sentence on its own. "I was 15" is a dependent clause; it cannot be a sentence on its own because it does not give any information - When were 15? What happened when you were 15? The 2 clauses joined together by the word "until" make a compound sentence, and "I was 15" now has a meaning.

Many Americans like to drink coffee while others prefer to drink tea. " Many Americans like to drink coffee" is an independent clause; it can be a sentence on its own. "others prefer to drink tea" is a dependent clause; it cannot be a sentence on its own because it does not give any information - prefer to drink tea rather than what? The 2 clauses joined together by the word "while" make a compound sentence.

A compound-complex sentence has 2 (or more) independent clauses and one (or more) dependent clause.

I'm not going to further explain compound-complex sentences at this time because you are not ready!

First, you need to learn how to write good simple sentences. When you can write good simple sentences every time you write, then you will be ready to begin writing compound sentences. When you can write good compound sentences every time you write, then you will be ready to begin writing complex sentences. When you can write good complex sentences every time you write, then you will be ready to begin writing compound-complex sentences.

For now, your challenge is to become masterful 能干 at writing simple sentences. I will tell you again and again; writing good simple sentences is the most important part of English writing. If you can write good simple sentences, then you can write anything! Don't forget Ernest Hemmingway; he wrote books using simple sentences!

Writing Styles

There are many different styles of writing; for writing in English or writing in Chinese or writing in French - for writing in all languages.

Writing styles include:

Epistolary 书信体的

Expository 说明

Narrative 叙述 / 故事体的

Persuasive 有说服力的

Communicative 写同样的谈

Creative 写作 诗歌、小说和歌曲

...... and others.

Expository style of writing is used to convey 沟通 / 传达 factual information 实际情况 / 真实的消息.

Expository style of writing is used for; writing reports, writing documentary essays 文献纪录, writing articles for newspapers and magazines, etc.

Expository style of writing is used by students to write essays, write reports, etc. It is also the style of writing required for IELTS exams.

Here in the IELTS department, you are going to learn epistolary style of writing and you will learn how to write good simple sentences. When you have demonstrated that you can write good, mistake-free simple sentences every time you write you will then progress to learning compound sentences, complex sentences , compound-complex sentences, paragraphs and more.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 31, 2007 12:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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How long will you do it for? One or 2 semesters (whole year)?

One academic semester.


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What is the students' major?

Second year English majors.
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