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torkonftw
Joined: 04 Mar 2011
Posts: 9
Location: Colorado
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 Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:05 pm Post subject: Resume critique please! |
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Hi all,
I'm the typical dime a dozen applicant - no teaching certificates/experience, very little Japanese ability, and I will have only a B.A. in English (will graduate this May). I'm going to be applying to several Eikawas and dispatch companies, and I would really appreciate some advice on my resume. I'm not sure for instance if I should include a picture - I know that some employers ask for it, but AEON for instance just states resume (would the picture put them off?). I've posted the resume below, and I welcome all responses. Thank you very much!
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X X. X
91304 Imaginary Lane, Bloomington, WO 39833
(000) 000-0000 [email protected]
Nationality: American � Marital Status: Single
Born: XXXX - Country
Objective
To become an English-language instructor for an organization who seeks enthusiastic, adaptable, and dedicated individuals
Education
Generic University � Nowhere, LL
� Bachelor of Arts degree, English Anticipated May, 2011
Elsewhere University � Somewhere, FG
� Rigorous coursework in English/Literature Aug. 2008 � June 2009
Community College � Behind You, HF
� Associate of Arts Degree, English
May, 2008
Work Experience
Helium � Online June 2009 � Aug. 2009
Website Content Writer
�Wrote over 100 articles concerning English literature, mythology, and website reviews
Local City Magazine � Local City, XY June.1999 - July 2000
Volunteer Writer
�Wrote monthly articles for young adults on teen life, local opportunities, and movie/book reviews
Relevant Qualifications
�Lived abroad for three years, have experience adapting to foreign environment
�Formal study of the Japanese language - Elementary Levels I, II, and Intermediate Level I
�Informal teaching experience with native Japanese speakers in and outside of class
�Interested in working with adults and children
�Achieved multiple Scholarships and Honors for Grade Point Averages
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Glenski
Joined: 15 Jan 2003
Posts: 12844
Location: Hokkaido, JAPAN
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| Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:07 pm Post subject: |
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Include a picture. A little research would have shown you that it is usually requested anyway. Professional attire, neutral background, head and shoulders shot.
Nix the "Objective".
State specifically where you lived abroad. Perhaps even why would be important.
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torkonftw
Joined: 04 Mar 2011
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Location: Colorado
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| Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 11:22 pm Post subject: |
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| Thank you very much Glenski! |
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