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Yu_Bum_suk



Joined: 25 Dec 2004

PostPosted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 11:25 pm    Post subject: Holy shit - unbelievable essay by brilliant, angry student. Reply with quote

This was written by a grade three middle school student. It's so unlike anything I've ever seen a Korean student write that I thought I had to type it out. This is exactly as she handed it in:

Future Dreams

Actually, I don�t know what I really want to be. But by seeing many teachers and wrong education policy, a small dream becomes bigger and bigger which I want to change today�s education. So at first I want to be a teacher and then become a minister of education. I will not be a teacher who doesn�t have any teaching ability, background, and common sense. But ironically in this country, there are many teachers who don�t have any knowledge. When I become a teacher, I will not be like that teacher. And I really don�t like those teachers who punish students violently. Although students didn�t do such a bad thing, teachers hit them. But not all of the teachers behave like this. And I really don�t like teachers who are not neat and clean. To be a teacher, I think, we need more tests and certification. I will certainly change those things. I really want the policy to be conducted early which students evaluate teachers. Then the teachers who don�t have any ability will be retired. In this sense, my dream is not just a teacher, but to change Korea�s education. It really needs to be changed. I will do my best that my dream to be come true. I really want the teacher who don�t have ability to disappear in the school.
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yingwenlaoshi



Joined: 12 Feb 2007
Location: ... location, location!

PostPosted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 11:54 pm    Post subject: Re: Holy *beep* - unbelievable essay by brilliant, angry stu Reply with quote

Yu_Bum_suk wrote:
This was written by a grade three middle school student. It's so unlike anything I've ever seen a Korean student write that I thought I had to type it out. This is exactly as she handed it in:

Future Dreams

Actually, I don�t know what I really want to be. But by seeing many teachers and wrong education policy, a small dream becomes bigger and bigger which I want to change today�s education. So at first I want to be a teacher and then become a minister of education. I will not be a teacher who doesn�t have any teaching ability, background, and common sense. But ironically in this country, there are many teachers who don�t have any knowledge. When I become a teacher, I will not be like that teacher. And I really don�t like those teachers who punish students violently. Although students didn�t do such a bad thing, teachers hit them. But not all of the teachers behave like this. And I really don�t like teachers who are not neat and clean. To be a teacher, I think, we need more tests and certification. I will certainly change those things. I really want the policy to be conducted early which students evaluate teachers. Then the teachers who don�t have any ability will be retired. In this sense, my dream is not just a teacher, but to change Korea�s education. It really needs to be changed. I will do my best that my dream to be come true. I really want the teacher who don�t have ability to disappear in the school.


Where did he get such good English? And don't say from your classroom.
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eamo



Joined: 08 Mar 2003
Location: Shepherd's Bush, 1964.

PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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I really want the teacher who don�t have ability to disappear in the school.


Yeah! She's totally expressed what half of the K-teachers in my HS are like. No personality, dead-pan expressions, standing at the front of the class mumbling while half the students sleep.
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normalcyispasse



Joined: 27 Oct 2006
Location: Yeosu until the end of February WOOOOOOOO

PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Damn, +1 for her! Go go gadget idealism!
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Yu_Bum_suk



Joined: 25 Dec 2004

PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 12:58 am    Post subject: Re: Holy *beep* - unbelievable essay by brilliant, angry stu Reply with quote

yingwenlaoshi wrote:
Yu_Bum_suk wrote:
This was written by a grade three middle school student. It's so unlike anything I've ever seen a Korean student write that I thought I had to type it out. This is exactly as she handed it in:

Future Dreams

Actually, I don�t know what I really want to be. But by seeing many teachers and wrong education policy, a small dream becomes bigger and bigger which I want to change today�s education. So at first I want to be a teacher and then become a minister of education. I will not be a teacher who doesn�t have any teaching ability, background, and common sense. But ironically in this country, there are many teachers who don�t have any knowledge. When I become a teacher, I will not be like that teacher. And I really don�t like those teachers who punish students violently. Although students didn�t do such a bad thing, teachers hit them. But not all of the teachers behave like this. And I really don�t like teachers who are not neat and clean. To be a teacher, I think, we need more tests and certification. I will certainly change those things. I really want the policy to be conducted early which students evaluate teachers. Then the teachers who don�t have any ability will be retired. In this sense, my dream is not just a teacher, but to change Korea�s education. It really needs to be changed. I will do my best that my dream to be come true. I really want the teacher who don�t have ability to disappear in the school.


Where did he get such good English? And don't say from your classroom.


Yale Academy in Daegu. Kudos to 'Brian-teacher', whoever that may be.

She also took one semester of writing class with me, but her writing was almost as good as above when I started teaching her writing.
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Rapacious Mr. Batstove



Joined: 26 Jan 2007
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 2:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sometimes at my middle school, it seems that some teachers are just well dressed bums pulled from the street, handed a belt microphone and told to read from a text boot while brandishing a bamboo cane.

YBS - I've had students express pretty similar sentiments in their writings. It would appear that Korea could clean up it's act by simply listening to the kids.
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Yu_Bum_suk



Joined: 25 Dec 2004

PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rapacious Mr. Batstove wrote:
Sometimes at my middle school, it seems that some teachers are just well dressed bums pulled from the street, handed a belt microphone and told to read from a text boot while brandishing a bamboo cane.

YBS - I've had students express pretty similar sentiments in their writings. It would appear that Korea could clean up it's act by simply listening to the kids.


What really shocked me about this is that I didn't think our school was so bad. I had no idea that one of our smartest students felt this way.
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mrsquirrel



Joined: 13 Dec 2006

PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

^ It's a good start though.

A few more of them and they could have a revolution on their hands.

Problem is if she is good at the free thinking thing she will get whisked away to another country to work there leaving the droids behind.
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BS.Dos.



Joined: 29 Mar 2007

PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:02 pm    Post subject: Re: Holy *beep* - unbelievable essay by brilliant, angry stu Reply with quote

Yu_Bum_suk wrote:
Then the teachers who don�t have any ability will be retired.


I hope she means with a single bullet to the back of the neck.
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oldfatfarang



Joined: 19 May 2005
Location: On the road to somewhere.

PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 6:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

An excellent piece - well thought out, argued and written. You're very lucky to be teaching a kid like that.

My only doubt is, after listening to numerous K kids voicing the same opinion, will she, too, become crushed by her society and turn into a smiling, love-stick-weilding, child-beating adjuma?

Where do these child-beaters come from? Surely when they were young they also said that they would never beat kids. ?????????
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