Korean Job Discussion Forums

[PeterDragon]

Actually, I'm really posting this in the hopes that someone can point out whatever mistakes I made in Korean and I can correct them.

I've linked it here, at a nice forum that actually lets its users link pictures: http://archives.tcj.com/messboard/viewtopic.php?t=7864

I created it in 3 hours. Anyone got the skillz to read it in 3 seconds?

[Chet Wautlands]

Nice drawings. I can't draw, myself.

A couple things... you started off with 먹어요 but later it changed to 먹아요. 먹어요 is correct.

At the very end you wrote 임니다 but it should be 입니다.

Good work though!

[PeterDragon]

Damn my sloppy Korean! thanks for pointing out those errors. I think I'll make a new version of this that's better drawn AND better written. thanks for the tips, and I'll correct accordingly. My wife also pointed out to me that 본대기 is a better word for caterpillar, that 고양 should actually be 고양이, and that 바고파요? is a less awkward way to say "Are you hungry?"

[jinks]

yeah, very nice drawings

[zappadelta]

At the very end, it says ____입니다. but, it's a question, so it should be 입니까?. In addition, at the beginning of the sentence, it says '너' which is 반말. But, ___입니까 is not banmal. So you have to change one or the other.

[T-J]

[MMagidson]

I don't know what the purpose of this is, but it's a great way to learn Korean! Great job!

[Chet Wautlands]

I think that anyone who wants to learn Korean should, like the OP, incorporate learning Korean into something they already like doing. It makes things much more interesting!

[PeterDragon]

[Tundra_Creature]

Very cute! Your son is lucky to have a Dad who can make storybooks for him.

[huffdaddy]

Do beavers actually eat trees?

[Chet Wautlands]

[PeterDragon]