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secjill
Joined: 02 Jul 2007 Posts: 51
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Posted: Mon Aug 13, 2007 5:13 pm Post subject: Does this sentence sound natural? |
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Hi teachers,
this sentence "The only feeling I need is to be cared" sounds natural to you? if not, how do you say it in a more appropriate way?
thanks a lot |
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beancurdturtle

Joined: 23 Aug 2006 Posts: 1041 Location: Southern California
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 12:37 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm...
Not so easy.
"The only feeling I need, is to feel that I am cared for." _________________ Daniel
�Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.�
--Dr. Seuss |
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secjill
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 4:47 am Post subject: |
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thanks, Daniel |
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beancurdturtle

Joined: 23 Aug 2006 Posts: 1041 Location: Southern California
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 8:06 am Post subject: |
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You are welcome. I thught others may have suggestions too. _________________ Daniel
�Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.�
--Dr. Seuss |
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ad-miral

Joined: 01 Sep 2006 Posts: 1488
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 9:50 am Post subject: |
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or: "The only feeling I need to be cared for." _________________ If I say "I love you" to someone, then I also have to say "I also love everyone else inside you, I love the whole world because of you, I also love myself inside you." -- Erich Fromm, the Art of Love |
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secjill
Joined: 02 Jul 2007 Posts: 51
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 4:31 pm Post subject: |
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ad-miral wrote: |
or: "The only feeling I need to be cared for." |
Hi Ad-miral
thank you but I don't think the example you gave is a complete sentence |
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Lorikeet

Joined: 08 Oct 2005 Posts: 1877 Location: San Francisco
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Posted: Tue Aug 14, 2007 6:10 pm Post subject: |
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Perhaps he meant, "The only feeling I need is to be cared for." but what about, "I only need to feel cared for." |
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secjill
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 4:33 pm Post subject: |
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thank you Lorikeet, I think that makes sense |
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