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MayWang



Joined: 05 Aug 2006
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 2:26 am    Post subject: Proofreading Reply with quote
Hi,
Can anyone help me to proofread this sentence?
"Within these ten years, we have been receiving many orders with heavy demand from world-famous beverage companies such as Coca Cola, Whittard of Chelsea adopting our tea as their product resources."
Is this sentence correct? Second, should I put a comma in front of such as or after Chelsea?
Many Thanks
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asterix



Joined: 26 Jan 2003
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
In the last ten years there has been a heavy demand for our tea from world famous companies such as Coca-Cola, and Whittard of Chelsea.
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