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iloveyou
Joined: 05 Aug 2006 Posts: 72
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Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 5:32 am Post subject: some sentences whether it is grammatically correct |
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Hello,
I am translating some report,
and not sure whether some of my sentences are grammartically correct.
I would appreciate your help
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TV ads conducted in 2007 than in 2006 more motivate audience to make an inquiry call
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Respondents perceive AIG one for all medical insurance as �the insurance that pays for actual cost�(60.0%) than as �the insurance that pays for predetermined amount of money for medical expense due to diseases/ accidents� |
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asterix
Joined: 26 Jan 2003 Posts: 1654
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Posted: Tue Nov 20, 2007 12:07 pm Post subject: |
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TV ads conducted in 2007 than in 2006 more motivate audience to make an inquiry call |
TV ads aired in 2007 motivated more of the audience to phone in than those aired in 2006.
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Respondents perceive AIG one for all medical insurance as �the insurance that pays for actual cost�(60.0%) than as �the insurance that pays for predetermined amount of money for medical expense due to diseases/ accidents� |
60% of respondents perceive AIG as the insurance that pays the actual cost of medical expenses rather than a predetermined amount.
I guess. |
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