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I can't tell whether my sentences flow well and make any sense.

Would anyone be kind enought to proofread my writing?



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Sometimes people think they're in love when really they just feel the need to be loved.

Opposites don't necessarily attract.

Sometimes it's better to go slow in building a relationship

better to build brick by brick from the ground floor up, not expect love to be a sun burst of energy.

and sometimes lovers fight with each other because they're together

spending time too much on an internet board

because they only have each other to take their frustrations out on,

and really they should spend time apart, to develop thier inner resources.