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lucy_ever
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 Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 8:38 pm Post subject: resume |
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Hi ,everyone , i'm a college sudent,but i used to be a teacher as a part-time job for one year, and now i'm searching for a job. Here's my resume. I want someone to modify it ,or any weaknesss please say it out. Thank you
Goodmorning everyone, My name'___ I graduaetd from ___, my major is Enlish.During college years, I was very intereseted in oral English and i think it's very useful for my searching job,. Meanwhile i took self--taught examination for further education . It helped me to get more chances to obtain the latest information . Now i've been working for one year,i think teaching it's quite ineresting and can be quite challening .One of my students won the first prize in an English competeion in 2007. In my spare time i like reading . Books can introduce me a new world ,which is corlorful and without time and space limit. My resume is enclosed summarizing where my skills and abilities have been developed. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss with you further at your convenience.Thank you for your time . |
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Bob S.
Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Posts: 1767
Location: So. Cal
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| Posted: Thu May 08, 2008 1:29 pm Post subject: Re: resume |
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| lucy_ever wrote: |
| Goodmorning everyone, |
To whom it may concern,
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| My name'___ I graduaetd from ___, my major is Enlish. |
My name is ______, and I graduated from ____ where I majored in English.
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| During college years, I was very intereseted in oral English and i think it's very useful for my searching job,. |
During my college years, I was very interested in studying and practicing verbal English.
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| Meanwhile i took self--taught examination for further education. |
To further my education, I took correspondence courses on my own time.
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| It helped me to get more chances to obtain the latest information. |
It enabled me to better keep up to date on current events and stay abreast of the latest trends in culture and science.
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| Now i've been working for one year,i think teaching it's quite ineresting and can be quite challening. |
I have been working as a teacher now for one year. I find teaching to be both very interesting and quite challenging.
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| One of my students won the first prize in an English competeion in 2007. |
I am proud to say that under my tutelage, one of my students won first prize at the _____ English Competition.
Optional to leave this out because it is not actually your accomplishment.
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| In my spare time i like reading . Books can introduce me a new world ,which is corlorful and without time and space limit. |
In my spare time i enjoy reading because books can introduce me to a new world which is colorful and without limits.
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| My resume is enclosed summarizing where my skills and abilities have been developed. |
This is fine.
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| I would welcome the opportunity to discuss with you further at your convenience.Thank you for your time . |
I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss this further with you at your convenience and how my skills might best fit the needs of your company.
Thank you for taking the time to read this.
Sincerely,
___________ |
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