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sabrinak
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 Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 9:55 pm Post subject: comma and that |
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Hello,
Which one is grammatically correct? Or both are okay?
1. The female dnaner in ballet does much of her dancing en pointe, that is on the tips of her toes.
2. The female dnaner in ballet does much of her dancing en pointe. That is on the tips of her toes.
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Lorikeet
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| Posted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 2:38 pm Post subject: Re: comma and that |
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| sabrinak wrote: |
Hello,
Which one is grammatically correct? Or both are okay?
1. The female dnaner in ballet does much of her dancing en pointe, that is on the tips of her toes.
2. The female dnaner in ballet does much of her dancing en pointe. That is on the tips of her toes.
Thank you all the time. |
It sounds better to me to say, "The female dancer in ballet does much of her dancing en pointe; that is, on the tips of her toes." Waiting to see what everyone else says  |
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