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[JimHC]

Tuition culture become a trend among students in in schools nowadays. Is undeniable that tuition have its benefit but some parents deny it. In my opinion, tuition classes have both advantages and disadvantages.
For the working parents , it is the best wat that their children go for tuition centre after they come back from school because they can use their ample time to study the lessons they learnt today.Moreover the parents will feel relieved that their children are safe . Besides that, the students grades have improved since their children enrolled for tuition classes too.
Nevertheless, some parents dissent that tuition classes is beneficial because some of the teachers may neglect their actual classroom teaching and just rush through the lessons and sit down to mark the homework in the classroom.Otherwise, the students will develop with bad habit that the students will reckon on the notes without thinking by themself. In addition, tuition classes will become a burden to parents because the tuition fees is not cheap.
Tuition classes have both advantages and disadvantages. In order to avoid teacher's neglect , school authorities must monitored the teachers. Therefore, students can study by themself without the help of tuition classes.



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