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klafterreith
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 Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 7:18 am Post subject: belief |
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My belief is according to a study that has found out tha many people crave information like a drug.
Is the `my belief is according� part acceptable? It should express: My opinion is based on the fact.....
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scottish_tiger
Joined: 16 Jul 2003
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| Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 3:43 pm Post subject: |
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Hi klafterreith,
To make your sentence complete and more accurate, it would be better to say:
"My belief is that, according to a study, many people crave information like a drug."
Hope that is useful
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miss.purple
Joined: 07 Dec 2009
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| Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 9:51 pm Post subject: |
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hi!
I agree with the above reply. Btw.. this is my first post and am so very excited about it. 
Hope to keep writing!
bye
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scottish_tiger
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| Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:34 am Post subject: Welcome |
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Welcome to the ESL Cafe Miss Purple. I look forward to reading further posts from you.
Good luck
Scottish Tiger
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