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nawee
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 Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2010 2:17 am Post subject: "Our knowledgeable team is happy..." |
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Hello,
"Our knowledgeable team is happy to work with the clients on their own designs and help them make the best choice to meet their commission and budget requirements."
Is the word "happy" too informal here in the company's profile? Is there any other words that will fit better?
Thank you.
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pugachevV
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"Our knowledgeable team is happy to work with clients on their own designs and help them make the best choice to meet their commission and budget requirements."
You don't really need to include their. |
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CP
Joined: 12 Jun 2006
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"Our knowledgeable team is happy to work with the clients" is perfectly fine.
You could also say:
"Our knowledgeable team is pleased to work with the clients";
"Our knowledgeable team is willing to work with the clients";
"Our knowledgeable team is excited to work with the clients".
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