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Jerry Chen



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PostPosted: Mon Oct 03, 2011 5:47 am    Post subject: Need help from native speakers of English Reply with quote

Hello,

As the sentence says,

Little did the audience know that as I stood there looking "all together," my heart beat wildly. Then, I decided that this must not be true at all.

1. What does "all together" here mean?

2. Is it better to re-write the sentence as"...I decided that this must not have been true at all"?

Thanks for responding to my question!!
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pugachevV



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PostPosted: Tue Oct 04, 2011 4:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

All together, means composed.
He's telling us how he felt at that moment in the past, but he is using the present tense, for dramatic effect, to give us a sense of immediacy .
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