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klafterreith



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PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2012 6:52 am    Post subject: it`s inside Reply with quote
(about plastic surgery)


Also if you fix your outside, it`s inside that counts.


Are there any serious mistakes in that sentence. Please help me spot them.
Thank you.
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askeladd



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Location: Chicago area, USA
PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2012 7:17 am    Post subject: Re: it`s inside Reply with quote
klafterreith wrote:
(about plastic surgery)

Also if you fix your outside, it`s inside that counts.

Are there any serious mistakes in that sentence. Please help me spot them.
Thank you.


This would be better:

Also, even if you fix your outside, it's the inside that counts.

And, actually, I would probably leave out the "also" - it tends to get overused.

Hope this helps Smile
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