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fw



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PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:08 pm    Post subject: with or without a comma? Reply with quote

I�m interested in the use of punctuation.

Which is more common, #1 or #2, below?
1. Bill hurt his knees playing soccer in the park.
2. Bill hurt his knees, playing soccer in the park.


I have long thought #2 is, but I recently found #1 in *a grammar book published here in Japan. What do you think?
(*from p.239 of K. Yoshinami, et al�s �Breakthrough English Grammar� from Biseisha, 2011, Kyoto, Japan)
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 16, 2012 9:37 pm    Post subject: Re: with or without a comma? Reply with quote

fw wrote:
I�m interested in the use of punctuation.

Which is more common, #1 or #2, below?
1. Bill hurt his knees playing soccer in the park.
2. Bill hurt his knees, playing soccer in the park.


I have long thought #2 is, but I recently found #1 in *a grammar book published here in Japan. What do you think?
(*from p.239 of K. Yoshinami, et al�s �Breakthrough English Grammar� from Biseisha, 2011, Kyoto, Japan)


I agree with the book. I don't think a comma is necessary. If you had the sentence, "Bill hurt his knees while he was playing soccer in the park." you wouldn't need it either.
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 8:42 pm    Post subject: Re: with or without a comma? Reply with quote

fw wrote:
I�m interested in the use of punctuation.

Which is more common, #1 or #2, below?
1. Bill hurt his knees playing soccer in the park.
2. Bill hurt his knees, playing soccer in the park.


I have long thought #2 is, but I recently found #1 in *a grammar book published here in Japan. What do you think?
(*from p.239 of K. Yoshinami, et al�s �Breakthrough English Grammar� from Biseisha, 2011, Kyoto, Japan)


A comma there would be wrong. "hurt his knees playing soccer.." is one related thought, so it cannot be separated by a comma.
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