Bob S.
Joined: 29 Apr 2004
Posts: 1767
Location: So. Cal
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 Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 3:05 pm Post subject: Incoherent |
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A valiant if longwinded effort, but the post is rather incoherent. For future reference, please remember the following:
Break your thoughts up into more coherent paragraphs.
Keep your paragraphs organized for a clear flow of your ideas and to avoid the tedium of going in circles.
"Brevity is the soul of wit." -- Hamlet. Act ii. Sc. 2. William Shakespeare
Please try again, and good luck. |
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