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I want to talk about my idol. My idol is a group. They are Westlife. They come from Ireland. They are very handsome. Westlife are made up 5 person, they are Shane, Mark, Kian, Nicky and Bryan.
First, there are 3 person in the team. Shane, Mark and Kian made up a team, named "I.O.U". Then 2 person join in them. Afterward, they sang together. Then Westside born in Ireland.
But there was a group with the same name in America. Certainly, they changed their name in Westlife. Now, they released 5 albums. I like pop music, and hate rock music. Because they sang pop music, I'm a real fan of them--Westlife.

If there are some mistakes in this article, please correct. Thanks very much.

[RebeccaGMW]

Hi! Here are some corrections:

I want to talk about my idol. My idol is a group. They are called (or named) Westlife. They come from Ireland. They are very handsome. Westlife is (the name of the group would be seen as a single or non-count noun) made up of five people. They are Shane, Mark, Kian, Nicky and Bryan.
First, there were three people in (or on) the team ("group" or "band" would be better here). Shane, Mark and Kian made up a team, named "I.O.U". Then two other people joined them. Afterward, they sang together. Then the band Westside was born in Ireland.
But there was a group with the same name in America. As a result, they changed their name to Westlife. They have released five albums. I like pop music, and hate rock music. Because they sang pop music, I'm a real fan of them--Westlife.

I hope that helps!

Blessings,
Rebecca
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Thanks !! I want to talk in class. And I think I will pass the test!^^