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[missdaredevil]

I enjoy jazz and hip-hop dancing, to me, it�s a form of livening up my spirit.

would anyone care to point out the possible mistake there or any suggestios? thanks

[asterix]

I enjoy jazz and hip hop dancing; to me it's a way of livening up my spirit.
OR a way to liven up my spirit.
I think you need the semi colon rather than the comma.

[missdaredevil]

Thanks a lot. I'll sure pay more attention to *semi-colons* more.