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river1974
Joined: 20 May 2003 Posts: 525 Location: Taiwan
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 6:15 pm Post subject: rewrite |
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Dear teachers:
Since the image reading device lacks a cover and a light guide, it could not transmit the light efficiently.
Rewrite:
(a) Since lacking a cover and a light guide, the image reading device could not transmit the light efficiently.
(b) Lacking a cover and a light guide, the image reading device could not transmit the light efficiently.
Are (a) and (b) correct?
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bud
Joined: 09 Mar 2003 Posts: 2111 Location: New Jersey, US
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 12:50 pm Post subject: |
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The second is good, but the first isn't. With a small edit (Since it is lacking...), it would be correct. |
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