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[Junkomama]

Hello, teachers.

Are the following sentences acceptable?

Mr. Brown had/experienced two loves in his life.
One was when he was a college student/with a classmate in a college and another was when he was at work/with a colleague when he was at work.

Thank you in advance!

With regards,
Junkomama

[ab]

Mr. Brown had experienced two loves in his life.
One was when he was a college student, and another was when he worked.
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[Junkomama]

Thank you very much for your correction, ab!!
That was a great help!

Junkomama