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[luciaC]

Grammar questions
1. The rain is getting heavier and heavier.
2. We must stay alert not to drink too much alcohol.
3. Alcohol may damage the liver, the heart, the stomach, and the brain.
4. Alcohol may damage the liver, heart, stomach, and brain.
5. Drinking alcohol can make blood pressure increase higher and think unwisely.
6. We should drink an average of six to eight glasses of water each day.
7. we need enough water for the proper metabolism of our body.
8. Pure and clean water helps our body stay healthy and our skin to stay moisture.
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Mimi

[tri]

1. ok
2. ok
3. no articles
4. no article
5. i would say: ..cause you to think unwisely.
6. ok
7. ok
8. ..and our skin stay moisturised.
Or: Pure and clean water helps our bodies stay healthy and our skin moisturised.

[bud]

#3 and #4 are fine, in my opinion.

[Ezilzha]

1. ok
2. ok
3 + 4. no coma before "and"
5. if you write "increase" no need to write "higher".
may write "and may cause unwise thinking"
6. "every day" instead of "each day"
8. "help" without "s"