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[RedRose]

Love!

what is love?
I don't know.
how come I don't know?
I really don't know!

some people say,
love is like a flower,
fragile and beautiful
I think love is something like meat
delicious and available

Love is something you should take care of
love is something you have to make!!

[admiral]

Yes, love is that feeling which stays in most of us.

This feeling contains of discipline, concentration, patience, reason and belief.

If we do something what we like, we set time in it. We think it's important for us, and we don't give up as long as there is hope.
It's important enough to stop everything else and to concentrate in it, everybody who really wants to achieve something knows the importance of patience, although we won't get money for the time we invest.
We have to be present with our heart, when we are together with our love, to talk with reason, to see with reason through our eyes.

Last, we have to believe in the love. We believe in the vision what we have, look at it again with our reason, and to be disciplinated, concentrated and patient in our association with our love.

If everything is given, then it's the real love for me. (But however, I also read it from a book, but that's why I like this book very much)

Perhaps that's different for you, but for me, it's exactly it.
And if the love will at last go away, I won't matter because I will have loved her, and I will have lived these feelings.
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If I say "I love you" to someone, then I also have to say "I love inside you everyone else. I love the whole world because of you. I also love myself inside you"

[RedRose]

Admiral, I hope your dream comes true in the near future!

[eda]

RedRose your poem is a such a enjoyable and clever one i really liked it.

and admiral...this sentence is great ;"If everything is given, then it's the real love for me" i totaly agree with you. but sometimes people get tired of giving and not receving anything in return,not receiving what they deserve.
anyway i hope we can find that "real love"

[Cristi]

Nice poem!!!

Keep working...

"La poes�a es indispensable, pero no sabr�a decir para qu�"

Some famous person I don't remeber.
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�PURA VIDA! Carpe Diem

"Courage is resistance to fear, mastery of fear--not absence of fear."
Mark Twain.

[Michelle 1203]

[RedRose]

[Michelle 1203]

RedRose,
Yeah, LOVE is what I need most right now.
respect others.....