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RedRose
Joined: 21 May 2004
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Location: GuangZhou, China
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 Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 3:28 pm Post subject: Re: hi again |
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| eda wrote: |
ZODIAC
Sagitarius is my horoscope
Some says we are hard to cope.
We are the sign of abundance and happiness
Well,i know we are a bit tactless!
Freedom and honesty are what we seek
And we like living in peak
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I love your new poem! but what is Sagitarius?
eda, do you wanna take the new poem to our contest? it is a wonderful poem! |
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eda
Joined: 01 Apr 2005
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Location: Ankara/Turkey
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| Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 6:19 am Post subject: |
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sagittarious is the ninth of the twelve signs of the zodiac, which the sun enters about November 22- december 23. we can briefly say ;The Archer
and redrose i will take this poem to the contest! i am happy that you liked this newborn poem  
greets |
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RedRose
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| Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 6:21 am Post subject: |
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| eda wrote: |
sagittarious is the ninth of the twelve signs of the zodiac, which the sun enters about November 22- december 23. we can briefly say ;The Archer
and redrose i will take this poem to the contest! i am happy that you liked this newborn poem
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Ok! here is your chosen poem!
I still hope you write more poems  |
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eda
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| Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 10:47 am Post subject: |
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B igger than me
R adiance of my family
O h,Thank god i have him
T hen i would be soo lonely
H ope to see him more frequently
E ager to see his face and
R eady to die for him...
ohh a poem for my brother..i am so sensitive these days, i missed him 
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RedRose
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| Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 3:24 pm Post subject: |
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Nice poem!
where is your brother? |
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eda
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| Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 8:03 pm Post subject: |
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he is serving his military service in a far far away city.
indeed we have been away for more than 10 years coz he studied at boarding schools,then studied at univrsity and finally became a teacher.and for 4 months he is at military,but he serves as a interpreter there,not as a soldier.
as time goes by i miss him more
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RedRose
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| Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 9:01 pm Post subject: |
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| your brother is so lucky, eda. he is getting so many experiences for his future. I guess he is a sweet. unlike my brother, who used to be a monster |
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Snake777
Joined: 05 Nov 2005
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Location: Ho CHi Minh , Viet Nam
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| Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2005 11:27 pm Post subject: |
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Your brother has to feel lucky 'cuz at least there is someone that did poem about him =) Hahaha i have not ever done those things . Oh yeah i used to do , i wrote alot about my brother in a paper ... and guess i wrote huh ?
LOl i wrote :" He is such a jackasss , he is a punk , he is so mean , selfish , he should go to hell , wish i knew his gf soo i would bully her like he did to me ... etc " Yeah i wrote soo many things like that when i'm mad at my brother . I dont like him at all 
We always have war . People told me that he would change when he grows up ... but now what ? He is 18 and he is still be like that . Hahahah wish there was any girls that could change my brother * prayingface * |
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RedRose
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| Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 2:49 am Post subject: |
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| Snake777 wrote: |
LOl i wrote :" He is such a jackasss , he is a punk , he is so mean , selfish , he should go to hell , wish i knew his gf soo i would bully her like he did to me ... etc " |
Snake, I don't think your brother would be grateful for your poem instead, he would probably thread sand into your food  and my brother used to do so.
Imagine: if I write a poem for my brother, his first reaction must be:"what's the matter with you? are you ok? how come you write poem? go find a hospital and Doctor! " that's my monster brother! |
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