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fw
Joined: 12 Oct 2005 Posts: 361
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Posted: Tue Jan 03, 2006 4:49 pm Post subject: Which is appropriate?(3) |
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Hello everyone.
In a novel a woman tells her girlfriend that she is pregnant. The sentence below is what she says when she finds he is at a loss for words.
I tried to figure out what you'd say when I told you.
My question is:
Which is appropriate, #1, 2, or 3, for the blank below if the sentence above is rewritten into the sentence below?
I said to myself, �( )�
1. What will you say when I tell you?
2. What would you say when I tell you?
3. What would you say when I told you?
Best regards,
Fw |
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Kristea
Joined: 17 Nov 2005 Posts: 167 Location: Minneapolis, MN USA
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Posted: Wed Jan 04, 2006 4:45 am Post subject: Re: Which is appropriate?(3) |
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| fw wrote: |
Hello everyone.
In a novel a woman tells her girlfriend that she is pregnant. The sentence below is what she says when she finds he is at a loss for words.
I tried to figure out what you'd say when I told you.
My question is:
Which is appropriate, #1, 2, or 3, for the blank below if the sentence above is rewritten into the sentence below?
I said to myself, �( )�
1. What will you say when I tell you?
2. What would you say when I tell you?
3. What would you say when I told you?
Best regards,
Fw |
Hi -
The use of the pronoun "you" is not natural to me. I would finish the sentence thsi way...
I asked myself, "What will he say when I tell him?"
Having said that, this sentence is not as natural as the original statement in blue text.
Hope that helps - Kristi _________________ "That man is a success who has lived well, laughed often and loved much." R.L. Stevenson |
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