fw
Joined: 12 Oct 2005
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 Posted: Wed Jan 18, 2006 7:54 pm Post subject: Redundant? |
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Hello everyone.
There are two similar, though a little different, versions a passage below. Which passage, #1 or #2, is more natural and easier to read? My main interest is whether or not �catching a ball� is necessary information in this context.
1. We watched a baseball game at Tokyo Dome yesterday. The game was very exiting, with everyone shouting loudly for their favorite players. Ichiro caught a ball with his arm out over the fence, successfully saving a home run. We went home, quite satisfied with the outstanding plays we saw.
2 We watched a baseball game at Tokyo Dome yesterday. The game was very exiting, with everyone shouting loudly for their favorite players. Ichiro saved a home run with his arm stretched out over the fence. We went home, quite satisfied with the outstanding plays we saw.
Best regards,
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