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PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 6:42 am    Post subject: Please give me some grammar corrections with my grammar!(Two Reply with quote

Now, say from another side. The government in China has launched a major attract about unemployment. Firstly, some companies think that university students have less experience in work, so government help students to vocational training. Secondly, growth rates of GDP are high. Export predicted that GDP grows one percent, there will have eight hundred thousand to one million people can get job. Third, Jiang Ze Ming said that enlarge employment rates is concern to people�s life and the safe of country. This problem is not only an economy problem, but also a political problem (Jiang Ze Ming, 2003). So we can see that government is attaching importance to unemployment. Forth, China has joined in WTO, industrial output is increasing quickly, the foreign direct investment is high too; many foreign companies built factories in China and supply some jobs for Chinese people. Developing in western part also supply jobs for people.
From those, though many university students unemployed after graduating, but this problem can be solved. So I don�t think that unemployed of university students will cause enormous unemployment problem in the future.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 11:39 pm    Post subject: A grammar check site. Reply with quote

Here's a site that you can have your grammar checked:
http://www.grammarstation.com/index.htm
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