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This is my second one.
Now I am forcing myself to translate an simply article everyday to improve my English ability.So I really need someone to help me adjusting
the article.And I will highly appreciate what you do.
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Move of the larks
The spring was coming,and it was thriving everywhere.There were beautiful flowers,green trees,clear streams in the woods.A mother lark was looking for a house,she wanted to find a suitable environment for baby larks� growth.On the one hand the environment must fit the children to play around to keep their fitness,on the other hand it must also be a proper learning place.

In the woods?Not so good!Although the wonderful sunshine and fresh air,there were too many snakes and beasters.After totally searching through,she ended up with a wheat field.

The wheat waved while it breezed,and the sight was comfortable.The mother lark worked hard to nest then she started to grow the baby chicks.As times went by,the baby chicks grew up into adult larks.The mother lark began to teach them how to fly surrounding their house.Meanwhile,the wheat was ripe too.

One day the farmer came to the field,looked around the wheat and said,�The wheat is ripe,I have to reap now.� The childred larks heared and were very anxious about that.They told to their mother about it as soon as she came back home.The mother lark cuddled the children and said,�What�s wrong?speak slowly.�
�The farmer came here this morning.�
�He sure did because this is his field.�
�No!Mom,he is going to reap the wheat.And how about us?�
�How did the farmer say?�
�He said he will ask the neighbors for help.�
�All right.All right.He�s just asked someone for help,not really wanted to reap.You keep your mind on doing your homework and learning.The moving time has not came yet.�
After few days,the farmer came once again.He stood on the field with his son.
�My boy!Look!The wheat is too ripe to drop to the ground.�said the farmer.His son held up the wheat and had a deep look at it.�Papa,I�ll help you to reap the wheat tomorrow. �
The mother lark heared the talk between the farmer and his son.She turned to say,
�Kids,we shall move now.�
�Why?�asked the children larks.
�The farmer is going to reap in a hurry.Now he needs no one�s help and wants to do it by himself.�
THE END
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