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[aisen]

Hi members,

I need some grammar help again. Is the following sentence all right?

I didn't approve of joining our club.

How does this sentence sound to you?

Thanks in advance.

[mescalero]

Aisen:

I think that sentence looks good. I might suggest that you re-write it as follows:

I didn't approve of [his/her/their/your] joining our club.

By choosing one of [his/her/their/your] you will make the sentence clearer.

Best,
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[aisen]

Hello mescalero,

Thanks for your help. I appreciate it very much.