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river1974
Joined: 20 May 2003 Posts: 525 Location: Taiwan
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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 7:36 pm Post subject: sentence check |
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Dear teachers:
(a) The impinging direction of the light rays from the different sources is required to be maintained perpendicularly to the projection direction of the projector system.
(b) The impinging direction of the light rays from the different sources is required to be maintained perpendicular to the projection direction of the projector system.
Which one is correct?
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lotus

Joined: 25 Jan 2004 Posts: 862
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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 8:13 pm Post subject: |
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Hi river1974,
B is more correct.
You might shorten the sentence and re-write as:
The direction of impinging light rays from other sources must be maintained (perpendicular) to the projection system.
The words in parenthesis can be replaced with "at 90 degrees" or "at a right angle."
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pavilion
Joined: 09 Mar 2006 Posts: 75 Location: US
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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 8:13 pm Post subject: |
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(B) is the right one.  |
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river1974
Joined: 20 May 2003 Posts: 525 Location: Taiwan
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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 9:52 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks. Here comes another question. Which one is more natural: at forty-five degrees or at forty five degrees? |
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pavilion
Joined: 09 Mar 2006 Posts: 75 Location: US
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 12:01 am Post subject: |
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At forty-five degrees is the correct way.  |
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