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river1974
Joined: 20 May 2003 Posts: 525 Location: Taiwan
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 12:58 am Post subject: each |
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Dear teachers:
(a) The table has a plurality of values therein, each corresponding to a character.
(b) The table has a plurality of values therein, each corresponds to a character.
Which one is correct?
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bud
Joined: 09 Mar 2003 Posts: 2111 Location: New Jersey, US
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 8:39 pm Post subject: |
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(a) is correct and natural.
(b) would be correct if you replaced the comma with either a semi-colon or a period. In my opinion that would be natural, but probably not as much as (a). |
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river1974
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 10:06 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks bud. Here is another example: The table has a plurality of values therein, each of which corresponds to a character.
In my understanding, it is a correct sentence. But could you explain why it is correct? Because of the use of the pronoun "which"? |
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bud
Joined: 09 Mar 2003 Posts: 2111 Location: New Jersey, US
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 1:29 pm Post subject: |
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That's interesting River. Yes, the new sentence is correct, and it has to be because of "of which." I can't explain why that addition makes it correct, though.
Anyone else out there know? |
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lotus

Joined: 25 Jan 2004 Posts: 862
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 9:06 pm Post subject: |
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Hi,
Sometimes little points in grammar and usage are hard to explain. I think this is one of them. I'll give it a try, but I'm sure there are better and simpler explanations out there.
Let's simplify the sentences:
a) The table has many values, each corresponding to a character.
b) The table has many values. Each corresponds to a character.
c) The table has many values, each of which corresponds to a character.
All three sound good.
In (a), "corresponding to a character" is an adjective participial phrase following "each." "Each corresponding to a character" is phrase describing "many values."
In (b), "each corresponds to a character" is a complete sentence in the present tense; therefore it should be separated by a semicolon, dash or period.
In (c), "each of which corresponds to a character" is a subordinate clause to "the table has many values."
"Each" is next to and the appositive to "many values." "Which" is a relative pronoun in the prepositional phrase "of which" which modifies "each" in the phrase "each of which." Since "each" is an indefinite pronoun, and "of which" modifies "each", "which" must modify "many values." Since it modifies "many values" in the first clause, it depends on the first clause for meaning. It is a dependent (subordinate) clause. Since it is a dependent subordinate clause, it is set off by a comma after the main clause.
"WHEW!"
I'm sure there are better or simpler explanations out there! I just don't know them right now.
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river1974
Joined: 20 May 2003 Posts: 525 Location: Taiwan
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Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 10:05 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks lotus. Your explanations make sense to me.  |
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LucentShade
Joined: 30 Dec 2003 Posts: 542 Location: Nebraska, USA
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Posted: Wed Mar 22, 2006 2:10 am Post subject: |
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river1974 wrote: |
Thanks bud. Here is another example: The table has a plurality of values therein, each of which corresponds to a character.
In my understanding, it is a correct sentence. But could you explain why it is correct? Because of the use of the pronoun "which"? |
In the first version, you're using a comma to connect two independent clauses that could form a separate sentence.
"The table has a plurality of values therein. Each corresponds to a character."
Independent clauses have to be joined with a conjunction or a semicolon; a comma is not enough. (Note the semicolon in the previous sentence )
If you write "each of which," the second half becomes a relative clause, and this relative clause is dependent. "Each of which corresponds to a character" is not a complete sentence. So, in the revised version, a comma is fine. (There's also the matter of "each of which..." being a nonrestrictive clause, a type which must be set off by one of more commas, but we'll leave that point aside.) |
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