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When a person falls in love, he acts differently.

If you wash your jeans often, the color may fade away.

I feel butterflies in my stomach when I need to speak in front of the public.

Some people can see your future by looking at your palms.

Candlelit dinners at restaurants are usually very expensive.

I love him because he let me feel secure to be with him.

It�s a sweaty job because the boss always walks around.

If I have a steady income, I can plan my future easier.

When a woman is pregnant, the chemicals in the body change. She may get angry easily.

Listening to Mozart�s music can elevate my spirit.

A volunteer is a person who works without getting paid.

When you are nervous, the adrenalin is high.

I made lots of mistakes because I was in a rush to finish it.

All the things are composed by molecules.

Chinese New Year lasts for 15 days.
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Mimi

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When a person falls in love, he acts differently.

(you can also say, When people fall in love they act differently. This gets you out of the problem of gender specific pronouns.)

If you wash your jeans often, the color may fade (away).

You can omit away

I feel butterflies in my stomach when I need to speak in (front of the) public.
You can omit the words in brackets.

Some people can see your future by looking at your palms.

Candlelit dinners at restaurants are usually very expensive.

I love him because he let me feel secure to be with him.

More usual would be: he made, (or makes) me feel secure etc..

It�s a sweaty job because the boss always walks around.

It's stressful rather than sweaty, I think.

If I have a steady income, I can plan my future easier.

When a woman is pregnant, the chemicals in the body change. She may get angry easily.

Listening to Mozart�s music can elevate my spirit.
(Mine too!)

A volunteer is a person who works without getting paid.

When you are nervous, the adrenalin is high.
(Or your adrenaline)

I made lots of mistakes because I was in a rush to finish it.

All the things are composed by molecules.

All things are composed of molecules. You could also use, everything instead of all things.

Chinese New Year lasts for 15 days.

Good Work!

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