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stevenukd
Joined: 13 Nov 2005 Posts: 324
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Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 2:22 am Post subject: Better |
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Dear Teachers,
1.Come on man! She doesn�t deserve to have your love.
-Is this natural?
2.I often hear many people say �hey dude!�, so what does �dude� mean? Is it polite to use it in daily conversation?
3.Come on my friend! Forget the past; you have to live with the present.
-Is this natural?
4.In this choir, no one can understand her better than me / I�m the one who understand her the most.
-Is this natural?
5.If you want to be successful / to succeed, you have to integrate with other people.
-Is this natural?
Thanks a lot to Teachers,
Stevenukd. |
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asterix
Joined: 26 Jan 2003 Posts: 1654
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Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 6:59 am Post subject: |
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1.Come on man! She doesn�t deserve to have your love.
-Is this natural?
Yes, but you'd probably hear, Come on man! She doesn't deserve your love, more often
2.I often hear many people say �hey dude!�, so what does �dude� mean? Is it polite to use it in daily conversation?
Dude is a modern way to say, buddy, friend, etc., it's a friendly form of address. You would not use it in a formal setting.
3.Come on my friend! Forget the past; you have to live with the present.
-Is this natural?
Yes.
4.In this choir, no one can understand her better than me / I�m the one who understand her the most.
-Is this natural?
If you are in a choir, it could be. I'm the one who understands her best, would also work.
5.If you want to be successful / to succeed, you have to integrate with other people.
-Is this natural?
Yes. |
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LucentShade
Joined: 30 Dec 2003 Posts: 542 Location: Nebraska, USA
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Posted: Tue Apr 04, 2006 7:17 pm Post subject: |
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A few alternate suggestions:
#1: "Come on! She doesn't deserve you!"
#3: Come on, forget the past; live in the present.
#5: In order to succeed, you have to get along with other people. (phrasal verbs are often more casual/natural than 1-word verbs that mean the same thing) |
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