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kisliu
Joined: 21 Mar 2006
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 Posted: Mon May 01, 2006 4:09 pm Post subject: plz help me clarify the sturcture in those sentences, thx |
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I am unsure these sentenses blow are clear or not. please give me some suggestions, thx you
1.However, after they got married for a while, it seemed his personality reversed.
2.he only want his wife to stop the noise instead of helping her to take care of the children.
3.The conflits between staying and leaving has been drving her into a crazy situation.
4. women are fearful to call the police because the punishment for assualting a spouse is considerd a misdemeanor.
5, mother is more likely to protect their Children to escape pain and indicate everything to let their Children to have a healthy future and felicific family.
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Mister Micawber
Joined: 23 Mar 2006
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Location: Yokohama
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Kisliu, it is difficult to know what you need help with, when you are not careful with spelling, capitalization and punctuation. Could you please proofread your sentences carefully before you post them? Using the 'Preview' button below the message screen is very useful for this.
Thank you.
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