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hiromichi
Joined: 12 Oct 2005 Posts: 1380
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 4:54 am Post subject: Two "as clauses" in a sentence |
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I feel the sentence below is little awkward though it is grammatically corrct. I like to know how native speakers feel about it.
Travelers jammed railway stations, airports and highways throughout the nation Wednesday as they headed off to resorts or hometowns as the mainpart of Golden Week got under way. _________________ Hiromichi |
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Kristea
Joined: 17 Nov 2005 Posts: 167 Location: Minneapolis, MN USA
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 5:34 am Post subject: |
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Hey -
Sounds fine to me.
- Kristi _________________ "That man is a success who has lived well, laughed often and loved much." R.L. Stevenson |
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hiromichi
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Posted: Thu May 04, 2006 6:53 am Post subject: |
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Kristi, I see. Thank you. _________________ Hiromichi |
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