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kisliu
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 Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:02 pm Post subject: plz help me make correction...thx vv |
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Billie Jean King also states in her article that women is not considered to be success in sport yet, they still need times to develop their interests while passing the Title IX.
is the sentence above correct?
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flying_pig319
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| Posted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 7:30 pm Post subject: Re: plz help me make correction...thx vv |
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| kisliu wrote: |
Billie Jean King also states in her article that women ARE not considered to be successFUL in sportS yet, AND they still need TIME to develop their interests while passing the Title IX.
is the sentence above correct? |
Good job. |
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dyCavin
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Location: Sichuan China
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| Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:47 pm Post subject: |
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I'm aslo a pig, not flying but drinking Pepsi Cola
PESPI PIG |
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Mallaien
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Location: Louisville, Kentucky USA
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| Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 3:14 am Post subject: |
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| dyCavin "I'm aslo a pig, not flying but drinking Pepsi Cola" |
Correct= I'm also a pig, not flying, but when drinking Pepsi." dont forget that extra comma. |
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